Posts Tagged Brendan Carroll

Twists & Turns – Red Adept’s Short Story Collection

Storyline: Well, what can I say? This anthology was full of twists, turns and surprises of the finest kind. Each author took their turn around the campfire and delivered perfectly! For brevity’s sake, I’m going to see if I can fit the summary of ALL of the stories into one mega-sentence. Ready? Here goes!

*deep breath*

A God machine, a were-pug, a terrible day at work, a klepto grandmother, the quest for perfection and understanding, an obsession, some shameful secrets, a hungry dragon and a do-over all await you in this gargantuan collection of greatness!

Grammar/Spelling: I hardly noticed any errors. I like to think it is due in large part to the magnitude of talent contained within this collection and due to the laser-like precision of Red Adept’s editing skills.

Building God – Jessica Billings: I can absolutely see why this story won first place. It was wonderfully written with a spectacular twist. It was supremely suspenseful and had a great Twilight Zone feel. It kept me almost distracted as I tried to figure out what would cause the spike and then drop in the number of people in the world so I had to keep reading to find out!

Should Have Seen it Coming – Brendan Carroll: At first, I really didn’t like Kurt. He was a complete and utter jerk. But, as the story progressively gets scarier and the suspense builds up, I found myself actually worried about Kurt and wondering what really happened to his dog and, oh yeah, his beloved. And I totally didn’t see it coming!

Granny Theft Auto – T.L. Haddix: Oh man…this one was awesome! I could absolutely imagine a small town (my hometown even!) turning a blind eye to the old woman’s thievery and her poor son. He was trying to do the best with what he had. I will say that it seemed as if the ending was a bit over-explained. I don’t believe that it needed as much of a wrap as was given.

Fired – Lynn O’dell: Utterly and completely perfectly written short story. It was the perfect combination of build up and story only to end with a sudden bang. This could have really happened to anyone. The ending brought about a giggling fit only matched by those you’d get during church when you’re trying your best to focus on the sermon and not all of the crazy inappropriate things that just randomly pop into your mind at the wrong time.

Unbroken Mirror – C.S. Marks: This was a beautifully written fantasy epic and I really would love to read the full story. It really sounds like a gorgeous and amazing world. It does seem a bit long-winded and heavy for a short story though. Maybe if some of the back story was pared down a bit?

42jorie – John Philpin: Another great short story with a wonderful balance of suspense and surprise. I really got into Peter’s frustration and annoyance with the smug Marjorie. Of course, sometimes, you have to be very careful about what information you share on the Interwebz. It could really lead to some major problems.

Leo’s Wife – Patricia Sierra: This short story was very well-written and I’m sure it’s happened to more people than would care to admit. Another inappropriate giggle escaped me while at work. (You guys are SO going to get me in trouble!) I did figure it out about 2 or 3 sentences from the end. But, I think that was the author’s intent. Sort of an “oh my God” moment and then disbelief that it actually happened.

Traditions – Michael Sullivan: Some traditions are meant to be broken and changed… I could really feel the terror and then determination of the girl as she resolutely set out to take control of her own fate. I felt every step she took and was really racking my ol’ grey matter trying to figure out what the sacrifice was all about. Of course, in the end, the story did end up asking some pretty important moral and ethical questions. Sacrifice for the greater good by staying the same or buck tradition and, for better or worse, change the world around you?

A Long Lonely Time – J.R. Tomlin: Another superb sample of short story sweetness. (Alliteration is a very powerful tool in any good author’s repertoire…or so I’m told. That implies that I’m a good author! HA!) Diane’s lived a fulfilling and happy life with her husband or has it truly been fulfilling? She is given the chance to revisit her past and make the ultimate decision that will change everything as she knows it. I devoured this short story with such a quickness that I wondered if it were all one paragraph. Hmmm… I wonder if I’d have made the same choice as Diane… Makes me wonder what I’d change if given the chance.

Overall Rating: 5+

You guys did an amazing job on these short stories! I really felt like each of you nailed the surprise twist and ending. I hope that each of you continue to churn out more short stories. What can I say? I’m greedy! I would also like for Lynn to be able to create a second anthology of greatness. Soooooo…get to it, y’all!

On a side note: I think we should ALL encourage Ms. Lynn O’dell (Red Adept, herself!) to write more for our viewing pleasure! If I can have a favorite story of them all (and I like to think that it’s ok for me to choose a favorite), it’s hers. You would do us all a great disservice if this was your only published foray into the written word (beyond your reviews, of course). Thank you so much for sharing, Lynn!

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Twists & Turns – A “Red Adept Reviews” Collection

Featuring: Jessica Billings, Brendan Carroll, T.L. Haddix, Lynn O’dell, C.S. Marks, John Philpin, Patricia Sierra, Michael Sullivan and J.R. Tomlin

Storyline: Well, what can I say? This anthology was full of twists, turns and surprises of the finest kind. Each author took their turn around the campfire and delivered perfectly!

For brevity’s sake, I’m going to see if I can fit the summary of ALL of the stories into one mega-sentence.

Ready? Here goes!

*deep breath*

A God machine, a were-pug, a terrible day at work, a klepto grandmother, the quest for perfection and understanding, an obsession, some shameful secrets, a hungry dragon and a do-over all await you in this gargantuan collection of greatness!

Grammar/Spelling: I hardly noticed any errors. I like to think it is due in large part to the magnitude of talent contained within this collection and due to the laser-like precision of Red Adept’s editing skills.

Building God – Jessica Billings: I can absolutely see why this story won first place. It was wonderfully written with a spectacular twist. It was supremely suspenseful and had a great Twilight Zone feel. It kept me almost distracted as I tried to figure out what would cause the spike and then drop in the number of people in the world so I had to keep reading to find out!

Should Have Seen it Coming – Brendan Carroll: At first, I really didn’t like Kurt. He was a complete and utter jerk. But, as the story progressively gets scarier and the suspense builds up, I found myself actually worried about Kurt and wondering what really happened to his puggins (doggie) and, oh yeah, his beloved. And I totally didn’t see it coming!

Granny Theft Auto – T.L. Haddix: Oh man…this one was awesome! I could absolutely imagine a small town (my hometown even!) turning a blind eye to the old woman’s thievery and her poor son… He was trying to do the best with what he had. I will say that it seemed as if the ending was a bit over-explained. I don’t believe that it needed as much of a wrap up as was given.

Fired – Lynn O’dell: Utterly and completely perfectly written short story. It was the perfect combination of build up and story only to end with a sudden bang. This could have really happened to anyone. The ending brought about a giggling fit only matched by those you’d get during church when you’re trying your best to focus on the sermon and not all of the crazy inappropriate things that just randomly pop into your mind at the wrong time.

Unbroken Mirror – C.S. Marks: This was a beautifully written fantasy epic and I really would love to read the full story. It really sounds like a gorgeous and amazing world. It does seem a bit long-winded and heavy for a short story though. Maybe if some of the back story was pared down a bit?

42jorie – John Philpin: Another great short story with a wonderful balance of suspense and surprise. I really got into Peter’s frustration and annoyance with the smug Marjorie. Of course, sometimes, you have to be very careful about what information you share on the Interwebz. It could really lead to some major problems.

Leo’s Wife – Patricia Sierra: This short story was very well-written and I’m sure it’s happened to more people than would care to admit. Another inappropriate giggle escaped me while at work. (You guys are SO going to get me in trouble!) I did figure it out about 2 or 3 sentences from the end. But, I think that was the author’s intent. Sort of an “oh my God” moment and then disbelief that it actually happened.

Traditions – J.R. Tomlin: Some traditions are meant to be broken and changed… I could really feel the terror and then determination of the girl as she resolutely set out to take control of her own fate. I felt every step she took and was really racking my ol’ grey matter trying to figure out what the sacrifice was all about. Of course, in the end, the story did end up asking some pretty important moral and ethical questions. Sacrifice for the greater good by staying the same or buck tradition and, for better or worse, change the world around you?

Overall Rating: 5+

You guys did an amazing job on these short stories! I really felt like each of you nailed the surprise twist and ending. I hope that each of you continue to churn out more short stories. What can I say? I’m greedy! I would also like for Lynn to be able to create a second anthology of greatness. Soooooo…get to it, y’all!

On a side note: I think we should ALL encourage Ms. Lynn O’dell (Red Adept, herself!) to write more for our viewing pleasure! Thank you so much for sharing, Lynn!

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The Red Cross of Gold I:. The Knight of Death, Assassin Chronicles – Brendan Carroll

Storyline: The Knight of Death certainly lives up to his name.  This story, surprisingly enough, starts off in modern-day Texas after a preface set during the Fall of Jerusalem in 1187 CE and another  short scene that takes place in modern Italy.  Our hero, Sir Mark Andrew Ramsay, is a grouchy Scotsman with a problem (several of them, in fact!)  He is not a very nice fellow, but due to a vicious attack and kidnapping, he has forgotten that fact.

While in this state of discombobulation, he falls in love with one of his captors, which is strictly forbidden by the rules of his ancient Order.  His original assassin’s mission forgotten, he has to fight for his life on two fronts as his captor’s try to kill him and one of his Brothers of the Order comes after him with  blood vengeance in mind.

I was impressed by the complexity of the plot and the ease of reading that made me carry this book everywhere I went, unwilling to put it down. I enjoyed the flashback action that told bits and pieces of Mark’s past worked in as memory flashes as his head began to clear up.  The ending was surprising and original and left me wanting to know what happens next.

Grammar/Spelling: Although it does have some grammatical errors and typos sprinkled throughout, I kept forgetting to keep an eye out for them because the story advances so quickly.  Another once over with spell-checker/grammar might make it even better for sticklers.

Character Development: The characters were very well described and developed.  There were several characters to hate and some that made me just scratch my head and go hmph!  For the most part I ended up hating on the right people and liking the best ones.

I loved Meredith Sinclair’s naïveté and Cecile Valentino’s evilness.  Mark, of course, is my hero even though he has a number of serious issues.  I can imagine in a series this long that there will be many more characters to love and hate and if they are as well developed it will be a pleasure to read about them.

Writing Style: Mr. Carroll’s writing style is refreshing in that he keeps the action going for the most part in such a way that it is hard to catch a breath before something else happens.  He uses dialog and accented speech (spelled out phonetically) that allows the reader to catch the full impact of the scene.  I could actually hear them talking in my head.

Descriptions of settings, clothing, feelings are included in the story as it progresses.  There is a bit foul language where a reader would expect to find it (non-gratuitous in other words), which I personally appreciate, but there are some mildly explicit love scenes that are tastefully executed, which I also appreciate.

Continuance: I found no problems with continuance.  Blue cars stayed blue and time lines were quite realistic and well thought out.

Overall Rating: 5-

I would suggest that the author check once more with a grammar/spellcheck or Beta reader, perhaps.  The chapters were not uniform in length and I like to stop at one chapter or two depending on my schedule and some of the chapters were very long.  The inclusion of scriptures at the beginning of each chapter really lent an air of ominous doom and I found myself waiting to see how they played into the story, this I liked very much.

I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a different type of Templar fiction than what is normally seen in the bookstore.  It is R-rated so mature audiences would be in order.  Even if the Templars and Fantasy genre is not generally the reader’s cup of tea, I believe that they might be pleasantly surprised by this novel since it includes action, adventure, mysticism, murder, mayhem, love, hate, humor… well, just everything a reader could ask for.

An interview with Chevalier Mark Andrew Ramsay of The Knight of Death and Assassin Chronicles Books 1-21 concerning his stormy relationship with his author, Brendan Carroll.

Celia:  How did you first meet your writer?

Mark Andrew:  It’s been quite a while since I first met him.  He had fallen into Loch Ness and I had to pull him out.  Bloody fool thought he saw Nessie (ahem).  Sorry.

Celia:  Did you ever think that your life would end up being in a book?

Mark Andrew:  If I had foreseen Mr. Carroll’s intentions from the first, I would have kicked him out of me house in a heartbeat, but he was in no condition to travel for a while and a bit.  I’m convinced that he was playing on my hospitality and pretending to be infirmed while he was simply gathering fodder on me.

Celia:  What are your favorite scenes in your book: action, dialog, romance?

Mark Andrew:  I rather enjoy some of the flashbacks because I get to re-assassinate a few deserving souls.  Sometimes I miss the action, you see?  Assassinations and swordplay are not as popular as they once were.

Celia:  Did you have a hard time convincing your author to write any particular scenes for you?

Mark Andrew:  I always come out on top, if you get my meaning.  I am, after all, the Alchemist.  What I mean to say is that I get what I want.

Celia:  Do you infiltrate your writer’s dreams?

Mark Andrew:  Bloody hell! Excuse me.  I have enough nightmares without flitting around inside that morass of mayhem.

Celia:  What do you like to do when you are not being actively read somewhere?

Mark Andrew:  Generally, I prefer a nice quiet evening in the lab making gold, sipping a good glass of Glendronach Scotch (or a bottle depending on the mood and the weather).  A nice fire, howling with the wolfhounds maybe.  (slight laugh)

Celia:  Are you currently engaged in a relationship?

Mark Andrew:  Romantically?  Bloody hell.  Oh, sorry.  (Shifting in chair)  That’s what got me into trouble in the first place… well, yes, I am.  Yes.

Celia:  Are you happy with the genre your writer has placed you in?

Mark Andrew:  It’s best that some would put my story in Fantasy.  That way I can go on my merry way without all the attention.

Celia:  If you could rewrite anything in your book, what would it be?

Mark Andrew:  I’d rewrite the whole bloody thing and make it a collection of nursery rhymes for hobgoblins.

Celia:  Do you like the way the book ended?

Mark Andrew:  Wot th’ divvil?  Did ye read th’ thing?  How wud ye loike to ‘ave thot ‘appen to ye?  Especially aftar oll ye went thru to get thair?!  O’ carse, I dunna loike th’ way th’ book ended, Lassie.  (more words, possibly in Gaelic?)  Excuse me.  Get on with it, please…

Celia:  Would you be interested in a sequel if your writer was so inclined?

Mark Andrew:  Now that is a silly question if I ever heard one.  Do you have any Scotch?  I’ll settle for a bottle of spring water, if not.  Thank you.  I think the answer is obvious.

Celia:  Do you believe that you are suitably portrayed in electronic books or would you rather be in paperback only?

Mark Andrew:  I have a library full of first edition literature.  They all have nice leather bindings or linen.  If you keep them well-maintained, there is nothing better than the smell and feel of a good book.  These paperbacks are a bit flimsy, don’t you think?  I mean the thing couldn’t possibly survive a little spill or two without the ink running all over the thing, you see?  And what happens if the electric cuts out?  You can’t run that contraption… that Kindle whatsit… on kerosene now, can you?

Celia:  Did you have any input into the book cover design?

Mark Andrew:  The first book was done without my permission and I had to engage a barrister from Edinborough to get any say in it.  I like the cover, none-the-less.  It ws the principle.

Celia:  What is the lamest characteristic your writer has attributed to you?

Mark Andrew:  They tell me I’ve no sense of humor, but that is nonsense.  I can be quite witty and I like to laugh as much as a body should.

Celia:  If you could give yourself a superpower, what would you choose?

Mark Andrew:  I already have more power than I know what to do with.  Power is a dangerous thing, Lassie.  Either way, too much, not enough?  The results are usually the same:  Disastrous when the time comes to take action..

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